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      Do and Dont 
        
  
  
    
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       It was really hot on the Caribbean island. There wasn't a cloud in the sky. The 
only breeze was caused by small  
animals running for shelter under the big palm trees. Occasionally the sand 
seemed to shimmer and move but that was  
due to the heat haze that played tricks on the eyes. 
 
The two friends were sheltering under the biggest palm tree on the island. They 
had called it "The Big One". But over  
time this had been shorted to Biggun, it was easier to say and as neither knew 
how to spell the word properly it was  
easier. The Biggun must have been seventy feet high and twenty feet wide with 
huge leaves that gave a very large area  
of shade, whatever the time of day. The two friends had built a little platform 
between Biggun and the smaller tree  
next to it, they called this tree Titch because it was so much smaller. 
 
The problem today was that both friends were very hot and bothered. They could 
cool off in one of the many rock pools  
that were on the edge of the beach but the real problem was they were lonely and 
bored. They had been stranded on this  
island for nearly two years. They had been hiding on a big ship when the storm 
came. The waves were huge and kept  
tossing the ship from side to side. Suddenly the piece of wood they had been 
perching on was washed overboard and the  
two friends had to huddle together and hang on for their life. When the storm 
subsided they found themselves a few  
yards from a dessert island and this was where they had made their home. 
 
In the first few months they flew around at night hoping to see the lights from 
other islands or tankers way out to  
sea. But they found nothing and had eventually given up the idea of going home. 
But where was home they had nearly  
forgotten. All the other birds had gone and they were the last two of their 
type. They had very clear black and white  
markings, especially on their tails. Their Mums had always told them to Do this 
but Don't do that and each of the  
friends had acquired a nickname that had stuck ever since. The one with more 
white feathers and the tick mark in his  
tail became Do. The other with more black feathers and the cross in his tail was 
called Don't. And because they were  
best friends they had been called Do and Don't, for as long as they knew. But 
they could not remember which family of  
birds they came from and now as they were both lost, neither really cared. 
 
Do was lying in his home made hammock and trying to swing from side to side to 
make some breeze and cool down. Don't  
had made a fan out of the leaves from Titch and was waving them around to make 
some wind. However, the real problem  
was that they were both bored. Bored and fed up because they were lonely. 
 
Suddenly there was a huge gust of wind followed by a loud plop as a large and 
strange nut fell off the Biggun. It hit  
Titch and cracked in two. One half landing by Do and the other by Don't. The two 
friends were shocked but picked up  
the two pieces of nut and started playing with them. Firstly they pretended they 
were telephones and that they could  
talk into the shell and be heard by the other miles away. They called for help 
and sent messages to people in the hope  
that they would be rescued. Then they put the nuts on the their heads and 
pretended they were the latest fashion in  
baseball caps, but the one on Do kept falling off and made Don't laugh. Next, 
Don't started to bang his half of the  
nut on the trunk of Biggun and Do did the same on Titch. They both made 
different noises and before long they were  
making up a tune. It was a calypso and went like this. 
 
When you're playing 
Out in the sun 
Down by the water 
And having fun 
Just remember 
To be aware - 
'Cos water can be dangerous - 
So you take care  
CHORUS: 
All playing by the water 
Just don't do things you shouldn't oughta. 
Down on the beach and havin' fun 
-Just play safe in the sun! 
 
Do and Don't loved the song and kept practicing until it was perfect. They 
created their own dance and soon all the  
other animals joined in. It even seemed that Biggun and Titch were swaying to 
the beat and joining in with the rhythm  
by waving their leaves. 
Do said, "This is great, but nobody can hear it. We must find a way of telling 
everyone about playing and being safe.  
We don't want them to end up like us. Stranded on an island miles from 
anywhere." 
So the two friends sat down, scratched their feathers and thought. They thought 
and scratched their heads for two  
whole days and three nights. Just as the sun was coming up on the third day 
Don't shouted "That's it, I know what we  
can do, how we can get off this island."  | 
     
   
  
 
  
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