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(Dis) Illusions
      by
      
Elizabeth Finn
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      
      

I see her 
through the amber-tinted underground of the coffee 
house,
Windows to the soul shut, save for the keyhole 
concealing a million flames.
Her tears never paint her cheeks, but remain acrid 
and unchanging,
Poised on the cusp of her liquid-fire brown eyes.
Her breath matches the steam in her coffee cup.
She exhales indignity in tendrils, like sweet hash 
or life-saving nicotine
While artsy has-beens circle around her, stealing 
her power
Through their horn-rimmed Rushdie impressions.
She fights them off with her gaze, and shifts her 
ambiguous arm,
Daring them to come closer. 
I see her....
I see her strong fingers tremble around her 
not-too-trendy latte.
Melodic Baroque waves part the jazz-infusion of her 
smoky haze.
Her chic boots, their leather aroma still holding 
on, 
Despite the organic stench in the air,
Suddenly uncross.
She wraps herself up, enclosing the warmth of 
artificial adoration,
And steps over her crippled soul,
Into the cold and breathtaking world.

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