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      I Saw You Praying 
      
      
      by
      Jolanta Gradowicz

I saw you praying fervently.
You were immersed in thought,
Your hands were clasped tightly,
Your requests seemed to find God. 
The view moved me profoundly,
I felt tears on my face.
Why did I react so sadly
When you seemed full of God’s grace? 
I looked at you with jealousy,
I envied you the closeness. 
My paths to Him were not so easy, 
I couldn’t sense His kindness. 
When I was observing you,
I desired to feel the same:
Peace in my heart and the truth,
But I knew my faith grew pale. 
I froze... I was at complete loss. 
I knelt down to pray with you 
And bent humbly before the cross.
It was everything I could do... 

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