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      Descent Into the Maelstrom
      
      
      
      by 
      
      Ofavon
      
“Can someone tell me the time? Please! I have things to 
do. There is more to be written.” He struggled to his feet and the effort made 
his head swim. He was aware of a faint silvery light in the high window at the 
other end of the room.
 He’s been in a frenzy all night. No one in the 
emergency ward has slept, and this morning since four am he’s been asking for 
the time. He’s had all the time there is, there will be no more time for this 
madman.
 “Sleep. Sleep, old man,” the orderly looks at him 
through the barred window in his locked door. “You are dying, old man -- let the 
rest of us sleep.”
 “Where am I?” he asked.
 “Washington College Hospital, old man. They picked you 
up in the 4th Ward Polls Saloon.” He wagged his head in admiration. “I never did 
see a man so drunk.”
 There is no bottle big enough to drown this man’s 
visions. He has looked deep into the dark soul of perversion - reached in and 
extracted the monster that hides in all of us. 
 “I have every right to drink,” the man assumed a 
dignity which was pitiful to see as he stood half naked by the side of his 
unmade bed. He could only see the orderly’s eyes in the small window; they were 
curious eyes. Pitiless. The eyes of a man waiting for the wire walker to fall, 
for the suicide to pull the trigger. “I asked you what time it was, my good man. 
Don’t you know what time it is?”
 “Sure, I know the time. Time don’t mean nothin’ to you, 
old man.”
 He was not really old - barely past forty, at an age 
where most men are at the crest of their success - when the training begins to 
pay off and the world comes to sit at your feet. He sat now, on the very edge of 
his wrinkled bed ... “Oh God, Oh God -- I’ve been with demons. Come Berenice and 
Lenore. Come here and sit with me. We’ll listen to the tintinnabulation of the 
bells. Let us sit on the shore of my kingdom by the sea. Let there be music to 
make love by ... “ He buried his head in his hands. “Oh God, Oh God, I smell of 
mortality.”
 “You sure do, old man. Doc says you’re a dead man 
inside. Lay yourself down again. Be quiet. It’ll be easier for all of us.”
 “Someone give me a pen and paper. There is a story to 
be told. There’s always one more story.
The End

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