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The Night Before Christmas



She hoped she did it right. What would Peter say if she didn't? Well, he wouldn't say anything, not really. He would wait for a quiet moment in the afternoon and fix them the way they should be.

She breathed a sigh of relief when she flipped the switch and all the lights blinked on. The lanterns along the driveway and the little bubble lights strung around the maple tree. Funny how little things mean so much in war time. What would Christmas be like without the lights ... gloomy. Oh, so gloomy.

He was gone four months now and she was six months along, and Oh -- how she longed to see him again. She couldn't bear to spend this Christmas alone -- maybe the lights would bring him home. Although he said not to expect it. At least six months, he said. That meant not until February. She'd be in her final month then. Too close, Peter, too close.

But she got a tree -- a small one, and the man was kind enough to tie it up and put it on the roof of the car. Even though the doctor told her to be careful lifting anything, she risked carrying it into the house and decorating it all by herself. She was good at that, better even than Peter was. She made yards and yards of popcorn and cranberries. They hadn't been married long enough to accumulate many ornaments, so she made most of them herself. Gold paper, glue and scissors and a cut-out angel for the top. "If you could see it, Peter! You'd be proud of me."

She was going through the day in her mind. She was sure if he couldn't make it by Christmas he would call. What was the time in Iraq? How many hours ahead -- was it ten? She couldn't remember. But if the phone rang! Suppose it rang, would she have the courage to pick it up.

It's bad enough to spend Christmas without him.

The End

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