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      Ellen Beth
      
      
      
      by 
      
      Sarah Laeuchli
      
It’s hot. A heavy, thick, dead heat. The house is empty. A Silent, narrow, dead 
emptiness.
Outside Weeds grow waist high; leaving the dry, straggly, dead grass feet behind 
it. The ground is dry, rocky, and hard beneath one’s feet.
Several feet from the house is a swimming pool, black-green water with sick 
green algae floating on the top.
The House is large, stone, and fast crumbling away. The door is off its hinges; 
the floor is thick with dust.
Rooms are indistinguishable from one another. Crushed, broken, rotten. 
Furniture, doors, and walls all blend together.
One room alone near the bottom of the broken, creaking stairs is recognizable: 
as a bedroom. The furniture here is old, but less damaged then in the other 
rooms. A canopy bed with the canopy torn down is along side one of the walls. A 
writing desk with rusty latches and broken pens lines another. Two worm eaten 
rocking chairs are also lying there, one near the window, the other lying on 
it’s side on the floor.
Black, rotten, skeleton like dolls, with their faces pushed in or split apart 
lie on the floor near the bed.
At the foot of the bed is a trunk, elaborately decorated with birds, flowers, 
and trees. Barel distinguishable on the trunk is the name ‘Ellen Beth’.
The chest like the rest of the house is fast deteriorating with time.
Opening the chest the lid tears off and lies broken on the dusty floor. Inside 
the chest, deteriorating with time, is Ellen Beth. 

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